Whywouldyouinterruptmysuicide

For now I have no patience to work with this picture more. I don`t adore the result. And I really hate the coloring. Have no experience in it. But practice makes perfect... I hope.
If you have any tips for me, speak it out - I`ll appreciate that.
The Lodger (that cutie with shaggy hair) is from a game called Knock-knock